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This is my blog for the school work that I do in 2007-2008

Writing Workshop

Filed under: School Things, School Trips — Holly at 7:30 pm on Saturday, May 17, 2008

I went to a writing workshop last Thursday. Phyllis Johnston, a New Zealand author, came to talk to us about how she became succesful and give us some tips about writing. Phyllis Johnston is quite a successful author having twelve books of hers published. One of the things Phyllis Johnston talked about was her ‘Recipe’ for a story. It has five ingredients. The first one being a ’scene’ or the place where it happens. A scene can be any where, from outer-space to a hole in the ground! The second ingredient is the ‘characters’, the main people in the story. Within the first few pages of introducing a character the reader should be able to picture the character in their own mind. Also Phyllis Johnston made us realise that a character has to have feelings, not just one feeling but a range of feelings. In other words a character can’t always be excited or surprised, their feelings should change. Like Phyllis Johnston said “a story without feelings isn’t a story at all”. Another ingredient, the third one is the ‘action’. The action is the part where somethings happens to build up to the big problem. While writing this part of a story you should be asking yourself questions like ‘What would they do in this situation?’ and ‘What will happen if they do this?’. The next part is the ‘crisis or tension’, I also like to call this the big problem! This part should always be the most important and exciting peice of the story. Last but not least is the fifth ingredient ‘the end’. One of the tips Phyllis Johnston gave us was to use a few words from the first sentence in the last one. This gives it a good effect, it is as though the whole story has formed a circle and come back to the start again. So as you have seen, I have learnt heaps and will use these tips in my future writing.



6 Comments »

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   Lynne

May 17, 2008 @ 8:07 pm

This is a very good summary of what must have been an inspirational time for you. I am looking forward to read some of your stories/writing!

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   Norma

May 18, 2008 @ 12:08 pm

Excellent post Holly!
I love to get tips about writing, I like to even write enormous stories on my blogs some times!
Good luck with your next post hope we could get along too!
Bye!

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   Stephie

May 20, 2008 @ 5:41 am

Hi Holly! I’m Stephie, fron takingitfurther.blogspot.com!. It’s great to know you liked the story! Be patient-I’ll post season 2 soon! A writing workshop is a great idea to learn more. Are you from Australia?How old are you? I’m from Argentina and I’m 13 years old.
Bye!

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   jill shaw

May 20, 2008 @ 3:06 pm

Hi Holly
It was great to read your comments on your visit to Phyllis Johnstone. She was really interesting and I found myself thinking about a story I would like to write. Her recipe for a story was simple and easy to remember. I will watch with interest as you begin to write short stories!
Jill Shaw

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   wings31

May 21, 2008 @ 12:53 pm

These tips seem like they’d really help with writing. I hope you do well writing your stories, good luck to you!
-wings31

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